User:Jwmc2077/Marie Aioe Dorion/Paigelebs Peer Review

This is a very fascinating article! My main issue is one I don't think you chose, but I think the headings would be better suited to describe the time of her life rather than location. Like "Early Life in Missouri" "Survival in the Pacific Northwest" if you wanted to keep the locations in them.

I think you did a great job maintaining neutrality and conciseness. It was easy to read and understand.

I would like to see what media/photographs you can find of her just to add some more interest and content to the article, but overall great job!

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