User:Jwr3gb/Borderline personality disorder/Lil' Runner 2.0 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jwr3gb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jwr3gb/Borderline personality disorder


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Borderline personality disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it is a good idea to add more information on interpersonal relationships because people with borderline personality disorder tend to have difficulties in their relationships. However, you did not include a reference for the studies, so I am unable to tell whether the information is reliable.

The quotes were also lacking references. One quote looks like it came from Mind. This sounds like a magazine or blog post, which itself is not a credible reference. I would look for links or references in this source that may lead to a credible source.

I would double check sentence structure and grammar. There are some capitalization errors. Some of the sentences are confusing and may be clarified if restructured.

You will need a references section. Using information from another source without citing the source is plagiarism.

I would recommend adding to the section "Mediating and moderating factors". It seems the least developed out of all of the sections. This is already a class B article, so it is going to take some deep digging through difficult sources to improve it. Good start, but many more sources and much more information are needed to improve this article.