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#1

Has the lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?

Yes. They added more references to the lead that are more current.

Does the lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes description of the article’s major sections?

Somewhat. The group could have added more hyperlinks to the section since some of the jargon can be too scientific to the average reader.

Does the lead include information that is not present in the article?

No.

Is the lead concise or is it overly detailed?

The lead is concise.

'''#2 Has the group achieved its overall goals for improvement? [explain]'''

Yes. The group has added a sufficient amount of sources and information to the article. The The visual aid for the FIGO Scoring System was a good addition to give breathe from all of the text.

#3 Do the edits reflect language that supports diversity, equity, and inclusion?

Somewhat. The article speaks more generally on the population, but it does not account for the differences of how this disease may affect different groups differently. For example, is incidence rate the same across all of the demographics? “Women” can also be changed to people with uteri because this disease may also affect trans or non-binary people who may or may not identify as women.

Race
At the age of 35, incidence is reported to be 60% in African-American with-uterus persons and 40$% in Caucasian with-uterus persons. By the age of 50, the incidence of uterine fibroids was >80% in African-American with uterus persons and >70% of Caucasian with uterus persons.

Recurrence of uterine leiomyomas 4-5 years after removal occurs up to 59% of the time for with-uterus persons of African origin.

Age
With-uterus persons who delay their first pregnancy past the age of 30 are at a higher risk for uterine fibroids.

Genetic Factors
Specific genetic alterations may play a role in the development of uterine leiomyomas. A mutation of a single mesenchymal cell with the involvement of progesterone and 17 b-estrodiol can lead to these fibroids. Additionally, modification of genes (e.g. CYP1A1, CYPb1, and MED12) may be involved in the development of these tumors.

Early Menarche
Some early studies report early age onset of menstruation increases the risk of developing fibroids. However, the biological mechanism of how this occurs is not well understood and further investigation is needed.