User:Jxlong/Sociology of language/Darr320 Peer Review

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 * Sociology of language
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This article's lead is very long, but it does explain what Sociology of Language is very thoroughly. Overall, the article is very detailed with a large amount of sources used. I think that a lead and subheadings could be used to make reading the article more convenient.