User:Jxlong/Sociology of language/Ghach Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AustinPetryk


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AustinPetryk/Sociology_of_Language?action=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sociology of language

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:


 * The content reflects a subtopic within the Sociology of Language, so while the lead of the entire article remains unchanged, the subtopic lead has a clear and concise description of the introductory information.


 * There is no clearly distinguishable lead as the additions don't surmise to the entire article, the content is clearly detailed in a organized manner.

Content:


 * The content added is very relevant to the topic as the users explore new subsections within the sociology of language that have yet to be explored within Wikipedia and yet play a relevant part in the academic and social modern world.
 * The content is up to date.
 * Because the users are adding new content there is not any apparent content that is missing, all content seemingly belongs.
 * The article does deal with a Wikipedia equity gap as it details how minority speakers, and their populations are misrepresented and face marginalization and discrimination due to the inherent biases within language in an American sociolinguistic context.

Tone and Balance:


 * The content added is neutral

Sources and References:


 * While the article closely follows that of their referenced sources, there are only a small number. Nearly the entire first section is covered by a single journal which, while insightful, could lead to a more singularized perspective.

Organization:


 * Content is clear and well written
 * Spelling has since been corrected

Overall Impressions:


 * Overall the article is well written and addresses a gap in Wikipedia that has yet to be explored or fully acknowledged, sources are well represented and reliable, content is thoroughly detailed.