User:Jxlong/Sociology of language/Toricooper Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) JAWs (Junxian, William, Austin)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sociology of language
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Firstly, this is really cool topic to read about. I think the lead could be broken up into shorter paragraphs. Possibly, you could even give the differences between the sociology of language and sociolinguistics its own section. Seeing such a long paragraph very first in the article is a lot. All the information there and the tone reads very-much like Wikipedia (a great thing). Th sentences are super understandable. The picture really makes it seem more professional, as well. The references, further reading section and see also section are all very good to have.