User:Jxlong/User:Cmalves24/Linguistic Injustice/Jxlong Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ethan Colter Monica


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cmalves24/Linguistic Injustice
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The over editing is well structures and detailed explain. Here are some suggestions that may help to improve the article:

Original Sentence : The field is highly contentious, with some scholars denying its existence as a form of inequality.

Pros : It is really thoughtful that you include the opposition point of view which show a comprehensive point of view.

Suggestions : I believe it is better to add scholars names and a brief explanation of their viewpoint(  1 or 2 sentences) and provide Wiki  links to those scholars.

Original sentence : Linguistic discrimination refers to the actions that lead to linguistic injustice as a global system. Linguistic injustice refers to the inequality present within a society.

Pros : This is indeed a crucial statement that distinguish the linguistic discrimination and linguistic injustice.

Suggestions : I am little bit confused about the position of this sentence placed and the logical connection between the paragraphs. I am not sure if you have finished editing, but I believe it is better to expand this paragraph a little bit.