User:Jyelliott20/Sterling Allen Brown/Gb202211 Peer Review

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When reviewing the article, the "marriage and family" section stood out to me as it is very short. His family is talked about in the "Early life and education" section. Furthermore, I was thinking that maybe some of that information should be in the marriage and family section rather than the early life section, or the title of that section needs to be changed to just "Marriage".