User:Jyi19/Jean Ahn/MRS1234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jyi19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Jean Ahn
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jean Ahn

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really appreciate your detail within your article, especially the subcategories within the composition segment. Your layout is extremely clear with many great citations and in-text links.

I have a few suggestions that may be beneficial. Perhaps you could add some photos. Openverse is a good resource for photos with proper licensing. I also have one suggestion in regards to formatting — Perhaps add a separate section in the article for Ahn’s awards and accolades. This way, the information will be easier to find, and more accessible to the eye. Lastly, there is a section on her Early Life. Perhaps a section about her current career and current life could be included.

I very much enjoyed your article, and I learned so much. It is very clear, with many helpful details.