User:Jzaragoza23/Gender role/Berenice Mondragon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Avil.M18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User
 * Jzaragoza23/Gender_role?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender role

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic, gender role. A brief description of the article's major sections is included, which avoids information not present in the article. The lead mentions major article sections including the relationship between gender role and concepts such culture, biology, and politics.

The content added seems relevant to the topic and up to date. Even though the article addresses topics related to historically underrepresented populations (women and LGBTQ community), it maintains a neutral tone.

The article is backed up with reliable sources, which accurately reflect the main ideas. I've double checked a few links to ensure they work and are current.

Overall, the content is clear and easy to understand and there are no grammatical or spelling errors.