User:Jzdollar/Enver Pasha/Loveyourlight Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jzdollar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jzdollar/Enver_Pasha?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Enver Pasha

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD: The lead has not been updated.

CONTENT: The content is great. There are a couple minor punctuation mistakes but nothing major, just make sure you catch those. I appreciate that you were able to add so much.

TONE AND BALANCE: I feel like you can tell a lot of the information is from one or two sources based on the tone, but I'm not sure if that's a negative thing. I think overall it's fine.

SOURCES AND REFERENCES: I think your use of two sources is fine. You've added a great deal of information from those so I think that speaks to the relativity and reliability of the sources.

ORGANIZATION: I assume this is adding to the "Pan-Turkism and death, 1921-22" section based on the first sentence. I suggest adding some subheadings or different format to break up the wall of text.

IMAGES AND MEDIA: N/A

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS: It's a great addition to an already incredible article. I think it's great that you managed to contribute such meaningful information and context to a subject so well recorded. I think you should organize it a littler better and spellcheck it. Also I think you should add a bibliography. Great job overall.