User:Jzdollar/Russian conquest of the Caucasus/Tbeaisasn579779257 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Jzdollar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jzdollar/Russian_conquest_of_the_Caucasus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Russian conquest of the Caucasus

Evaluate the drafted changes
On an unrelated note thank you. I was able to find sources and information about my current article from your article. Now enough about me. I think the article does a really good job on expanding the topic however there are a few suggestions. First off, organization. I think your paper would do better if you add headings within your annexation of Georgia as the section looks overwhelming so maybe making small headings like background could be helpful. Second I think the heading "annexation of Georgia," is inaccurate as in the article the heading is eastern Georgia so I think changing that would be better. Third, to sources you did the citation wrong as they are supposed to be like this " " so correcting the citation method is a must to prep your article for the internet. Also linking Wikipedia pages like Catherine could also help create a better article. Forth, be careful with words like "Shocking" as they can violate a neutrality of an article. Next add images to show the kings, battle, and other information. This can help the reading understand this very complicated issue. Finally, add more sources as there are only 3 sources so by adding more sources to support your claim can make your article more reliable. Overall, good job the article expands a lot on this very critical period in Russian history (also there are a few grammar mistakes such as "Catherines," so I recommend to fix these issue before publishing the article and think about adding a lead sentence giving a vague overview of the annexation).