User:K.1luck/Devil's Lake (Wisconsin)/Williamspeech11 Peer Review

General info
K.1luck
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:K.1luck/Devil's Lake (Wisconsin)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Devil's Lake (Wisconsin)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead in the article is well written and sets up the rest of the article well. The content that is added works well with the rest of the article and adds in new content without taking away anything from the already written article. One way to improve the article would be to take out the hiking section from this article. Even though it is an important topic when talking about the state park, it does not really have to do with the lake itself. I think that adding the boating, fishing, and swimming section can take over that section. I also think that the section focusing on ecology is a great section to add because the article does not talk about the fish or any other animals in the lake. Overall, I think that the draft looks really good.