User:K3tur8h/Genesis 1:1/Jweat24 Peer Review

General info
(K3tur8h)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:K3tur8h/Genesis 1:1
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Genesis 1:1

Evaluate the drafted changes
(The user made the beginning longer and had a better explaining on what the genesis was going to be about but other than that there nothing else there. His reference page gives valid sources for the article, especially the books. )