User:KCterm/Gender inequality in China/JamBing Peer Review

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KCterm
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Your edits add a lot of helpful content! The sources you chose and how you implement them works really well. I also noticed you chose very recent articles which is commendable. The addition of the housing section as well as the education section was a good choice. It's interesting to compare the current education perspective with the "women's education" section under "Before the 1949 revolution".

It's difficult for me to evaluate the tone of this, but linking your source multiple times was a good choice.

There is a bit of redundancy between sections, but I think that's alright because people may just read part of this article and not the entirety at once.

My only note about organization is for the "One-child policy and gender disparity"- if your addition was after what was already written I think that would work better. That way it has the definition and then the explanation.

Really good work!