User:KERT16/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Place des Arts (Sudbury)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I enjoyed this article on a familiar building within my area. I want to see how they formed an article on a building as i will be doing within my assignment. I feel like this article has room to expand.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


 * This article contains clear introductory first sentence giving readers a proper view of its use, place and project timeline. i feel that the lead section properly exhibits the structures intent and giving readers a good overview of key information. I would expand on the buildings construction and design relation to the community more in the lead section. As we analyze this topic through the body of the article it shows little significance to introductory of the article, while it remains a key feature of the building
 * I feel like the body paragraphs could be better organized. the architecture paragraph jumps a lot back and fourth between historical, cultural significance and building engagement. These could be divided and expanded more.
 * The text remains neutral, It touches on the building uses. i feel that the article does a good job at touching on all the subject equally while representing key information on the building. I do feel that the article could discuss community engagement more as a whole, it mainly emphasizes the francophone community relations.
 * The use of images are good in supporting the related context, i like how it demonstrates the reuse of materials. The leading section discuses a lot about its placement in the city, i feel it would be beneficial to have a photo showcasing the building at a far and its surrounding areas. This would provide visual context to the readers while corelating the text to photo.
 * This topic is apart of WikiProject, relating to writings in architecture class.