User:KHuckaby1920/Sara Shettleworth/Peyton Tooze Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
 * KHuckaby1920
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Sara Shettleworth

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Only some so far.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes!
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Once more is done, I'm sure it will.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Needs more in the article to be able to tell.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * Yes, the lead is concise and clear.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * There is some content missing at the moment.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * Yes! A woman in science! Psychologist and Zoologist.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Yes, all content added is neutral.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * No.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No, no persuasion, only factual information.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Yes, from what I can tell.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Yes, there are strong sources.
 * Are the sources current?
 * Yes.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * Yes, various sources, with diverse backgrounds in terms of marginalized groups.
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * Yes.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes, all well-written. Easy enough so most anyone could read.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Not from what I can tell.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * Yes, it is organized with headings. Just needs some more content.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * No
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * N/A
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * The article has had many edits and has become more easily readable. It does need more completeness.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * The strengths of the content are it's lack of errors and sticking to factual information.
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * It can be improved by adding more content of her career and early life, above others. Also, I know it can be difficult but, adding in a picture or two will help the reader to be more interested in the article.