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/Ashanta Baghphukan

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The background provides good information for those who wanted to know more about this group. The sources seem credible, and improves the article’s integrity. Where it was added “(5 of only 28 the organization has had since inception)”, should be changed to something more like “(5 of only 28 of the organizations had since inception)”.

Within the “Relatives” section, it is extremely helpful how specifics like the women who participated in the fasting, and more up to date events like Ashanta Baghphukan’s daughter’s video regarding her father’s disappearance were included.

In the “Court” section, the way dates were added in the beginning is extremely helpful. Additionally, it is helpful where more information on the wives and the court case was included as well.

Adding the “ULFA and the Missing Leaders” also adds credibility and valuable information to the overall article.

Under the “attacks” section, I would recommend to be careful about citing sources within the beginning of the article. You may have done it correctly, I cannot really judge as I am not an expert on the subject. However since the whole section is bold and there is several number facts in the beginning of the paragraph, I would just recommend to be cautious. However, like mentioned previously this may not be an issue and I may be just speculating. The section overall helps the article tremendously. The specific mentioning of facts, inclusion of years, and involving weapon types are a part of what helped up the article’s value.

Overall, the information included and the sources sited helped this article and the ones who wish to know and learn more about the group.