User:KMBenison/James Haskins/InstantPineapple Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KMBenison


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=James_Haskins&diff=1187038616&oldid=1174061134
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Good link that you selected to attach, has a plethora of information made available to the public. The wikipedia page says that Dr. James Haskins has over 100 books available to women and children, but the paper you attached says that he has nearly 200 books written, so you could potentially find a source that states the exact number of his published works and edit that in the wikipedia page.

The page could benefit from you correcting the page to specify what his BA, BS and MA are in and the number of his household.

You could also create a separate section for his career and include the years that he was in various locations. Maybe include any source and reword from those sources, where he gets his influence from/ what drives his writing?

Would love more links for sources on Dr. James Haskins.