User:KMCC448/Sexual stimulation/Ehernandez14 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KMCC448


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KMCC448/Sexual_stimulation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sexual stimulation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your "Asexual Sexual Stimulation" section seems pretty good. But I think you are still missing more content that will correlate it to the sexual stimulation concept. I'm interested in the sapiosexual subtopic as I have not heard of it before. Next, you have the "Graysexual sexual stimulation section" and to be honest this one seems a little all over the place. Don't get me wrong the content is good but I feel that it deviates from the sexual stimulation topic even though you do mention it towards the end. Maybe changing the wording will help? I would also suggest that if possible you include a table or research of some kind to go with " there isn't one way to sexually stimulate them ". Finally, your last section seems pretty good as well. My final suggestion would be to ensure that you include citations in all your areas as now you have a couple that doesn't have citations.