User:KMCC448/Sexual stimulation/Mfajardo2 Peer Review

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
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"Asexual Individuals are on a spectrum of their own, they can have Romantic Attraction, Emotional Attraction and even Physical Attraction. None of those types of Attraction have anything to do with Sex with another person." -- Can you clarify if and/or how people who identify as asexual practice in sexual simulation in their relationships? How might their experience be different that non-asexual individuals?

Therefore in order to sexually stimulate a Demisexual individual they need to be in love with that person. After forming a romantic attachment to another person and for each Demisexual individual the gender may differ, they may proceed to indulge in whichever sexual practice they prefer. -- Similarly, do demisexual individuals use sexual stimulation in their relationships? If so, how do they differ from non-demisexual individuals?

Graysexual Sexual Stimulation -- why is this section not under the Asexual Section?

General comments:


 * It may be a good idea to structure your sections similarly so it could be easier to understand and organize