User:KNNorm/Selective Service System/Natalia.tosi Peer Review

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KNNorm - Kelli
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:KNNorm/Selective Service System
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Selective Service System

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Kelli,

Very interesting choice of topic! Although it is a page that already has a lot of content, you have the opportunity of improving the available information on a topic that many people might rely on Wikipedia to understand, as well as the option of focusing on very specific aspects of it. You could contribute adjusting the references as you identified that the links are old or unavailable, which can definitely be an important edit. Other than adjusting the language, it seems like you can also add some gender-analysis or evaluate how the system might affect differently several groups, if you think it is something that would add to the content. Looking forward to your final version!

Best,

Natalia Tosi