User:KRose4/Kīlauea Iki/Olumideadedeji Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

KRose4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KRose4/K%C4%ABlauea_Iki?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kīlauea Iki

Evaluate the drafted changes
KRose has done an extensive work in improving the article including increasing the number of references and sections. Very Impressive. The content added is very relevant to the topic and is up to date. The content added also is neutral and is not heavily biased towards a particular side. The content added is also well defined and coincise.