User:KSinkler/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Climate change in Antarctica

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I think the effects of human behavior are important especially as the effects can be observed in areas in which human interaction is limited like Antartica. I also thought the inclusion of quantitative data to describe the changes of the climate being observed and how the changes have increased over time.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section:

- Introductory sentence could be more concise

- addresses most major sections

- possibly too detailed

Content:

- Relevant and up to date

- add more on the cause of the changes than just what the changes are

Tone and Balance:

- sounds neutral

- discusses multiple sides of the human effects

Sources:

- multiple peer reviewed articles

- one link only go to abstracts of paper

Organization and writing:

- a few grammatical errors but generally good

Talk Page:

- part of wikiproject with other schools

- editting and reviews brought up in description for grammar/ wording