User:K Wilson12/Long jump/Jblackman11 Peer Review

Lead:

The main article body, I like how you explained the different techniques of long jumping. It helps broaden your understanding of the sport and the various techniques that can be used.

Content:

I appreciate the detailed explanations provided for each flight technique used in long jump, including the hang, sail, and hitch-kick. The article effectively educates readers about the different strategies athletes use to improve their performance in this sport.

Tone and Balance:

The tone of the content is neutral, informative, and free of bias.

Sources and References:

There is a lack of citations throughout the article, which may raise questions about the credibility of the information. By incorporating sources in each paragraph, readers can easily verify the information and gain a deeper understanding of the topic. This would enhance the credibility and trustworthiness of the article.

Organization:

The content is well-organized, with clear sections discussing each flight technique in detail. The explanations are brief and easy to understand, making the article accessible to readers interested in learning about long jump techniques.

Images and Media:

No images or media were included. It could benefit from images to make the page more visually appealing.

Overall Impressions:

Overall, I like how the article provides valuable information about the different flight techniques used in long jump. It's informative and well-written, offering insights into the techniques involved in long jump. I feel I've learned a lot reading this article. However, to enhance its credibility, it would be helpful to add more citations throughout the text to support the information presented.

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