User:Kaanoi3/Eleotris sandwicensis/Waileia6 Peer Review

Aloha e Waileia6,

Mahalo for your feedback. I added your suggestions to my article last week and have updated source #3. Thank you,

Kaanoi3

Hello Kaanoi3, I really like the lead section you have currently. It is filled with relevant information to the species you're covering.

I did notice a source (source 3, the PDF) that was not found or might have been deleted.

Moving forward with your article I recommend adding sections to describe anatomy of the Eleotris sandwicensis, cultural significance, habitat, what they eat, and conservation status. Otherwise, I see an overall neutral viewpoint and good information so far.