User:Kacart98/Postpartum psychosis/Lmn23 Peer Review

General info
KaCart98
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Kacart98/Postpartum psychosis
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Postpartum psychosis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Postpartum psychosis has always been a topic of interest for me, so I thoroughly enjoyed reading this article! The lead defines postpartum psychosis, but is sort of lengthy. Adding some of the information into a "History" section might improve the article. The article has a neutral tone throughout. No claims appear to be biased. There is a solid reference list with a wide variety of authors. All references appear to be current, and the links work. I think the content of the article is well-written. However, I think the order of the sections could be rearranged such as the "History" section being closer to the beginning. The images included are great with clear, concise captions. Given the number of sections, I think more images could be added! Overall, I think the article does a great job at defining postpartum psychosis and providing information on the process of diagnoses and treatment. I think the user can improve the article by making certain sections more concise, and I am looking forward to reading the completed article!