User:Kacart98/Transcendental Meditation/M4c9s0 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kacart98


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kacart98/Transcendental Meditation


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Transcendental Meditation

Evaluate the drafted changes
I am wondering about the link to the Beach Boys song prior to the intro. This article is definitely a challenging one from an editing standpoint. I noticed that two of the most controversial sources, the source from citation 12 and the source from citation 13 are from 2006 and 2007. To support a more neutral tone, current or more recent research may be available to replace this information.