User:KachowMater/Digital inclusion/Ashtray10 Peer Review

Good job finding an up to date source! It appears to have good information that should be valuable for your article.

I would reccommend trying to find at least two images or charts to put in the article since there are currently none in it.

The "Indeginous digital inclusion" feels to broad as well and not inclusive of other minorities with the same struggles. I would reccommend changing the section to include more minorites or adding a section for each minority.

As well, the "Measuring digital inclusion" section kind of confused me for its purpose I would reccommend either adding more information to make it have more global information about how digital inclusion has been measured or delete the section entirely.

Continue working hard on your article and I'm sure it will be a success!

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