User:Kaciele00/TART Collective/Alexaalunaa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kaciele00


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaciele00/TART_Collective?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * TART Collective

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Nice job updating the lead

- Smal grammar error in the sentence: "There are artists that had contributed towards this group that is still revolving their art work around these ideas" with the word "is", as I believe it should be "are".

- Good job staying neutral in your information

- I like the exhibits part