User:KaelBanks/Iconophobia/Tul10616 Peer Review

General info
KaelBanks
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:KaelBanks/Iconophobia:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Iconophobia:

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, your contribution is small (only one sentence) and it is unclear where your contribution is going. It sounds like it would be best in the lead. I think that first, you should edit the current iconophobia article for grammar errors. Second, I believe you should be more concise with your wording. Overall, you have added important and relevant information to the article topic.