User:KaelonSmith/Carrollton Avenue/Melani Tonin Peer Review

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KaelonSmith


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 * Carrollton Avenue - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead was pretty good and the following paragraphs were well written and lacked biased language, which is a good thing. The use of the word streetscape instead of the word location was refreshing. The organization was fine and the pictures that you used also gave a nice feel for the location.