User:Kahmilmo/Skin care/Angelinasutton Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Kahmilmo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kahmilmo/Skin_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Skin care
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Skin care

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content is well written as well as concise and easy to read. It provides a neutral outlook and simply just explaining the detrimental effects of UV rays on skin and various options to seek out if you wish to avoid these signs of aging. However there was only 1 reference listed but I believe we need 2 sources at minimum and there is one grammatical error in the first sentence "Aging", other than that I think this overall was a very informative article and well organized.