User:Kahmilmo/Skin care/Ashley.n.reyes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kahmilmo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kahmilmo/Skin_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Skin care

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This is a very well written paragraph that goes very well with the article. It provides great explanations helping the reader really understand the information being provided.The strengths of this article is that you were able to provide the causes and the solutions of skin damage. This being said I don't think anything else needs to be added.