User:Kahmilmo/Skin care/Bxwalsh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Kahmilmo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kahmilmo/Skin_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Skin care

Evaluate the drafted changes
There seems to decent amount of content added. I did not see any grammatical errors. The only area of concern I'd have is how much you relied on your one source. I feel that if you provided two more, you'd be golden.