User:Kahmilmo/Skin care/Kmart0915 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kahmilmo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kahmilmo/Skin_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Skin care

Evaluate the drafted changes
To start off I love the details you included in your draft. Great job including the definitions of certain words people may not know. This is easy to read and fairly well organized. The one thing I would do to improve this draft is adding more citations as to where you got the information from to give clarification.