User:Kahmilmo/Skin care/Wikientry01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kahmilmo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kahmilmo/Skin care


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Skin care

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * I love how you are adding more to a section to give more detail on it.
 * I like how you included articles for certain words you were saying such as detergents and mosturizers.
 * Your claims are neutral and have data to support it.
 * Your source is reliable and is a study conducted by people on elderly skin.
 * For your image, maybe add UV lights and a diagram on how it impacts the skin.
 * Your content is well written for your lead.