User:Kaig2000/Down jacket/Destiny Hartanto Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kaig2000


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 * User:Kaig2000/Down jacket
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Kaig2000, I think you article is really easy to read and is incredibly interesting as well. I love how you added stories and a little history behind the puffer jacket and I did not know of such story as a frequent puffer jacket user. The article is extremely well with its transitions and it turns out to have interesting information that made it into an easy read. The leads and the general content was clear with correct cited information and information included that I think people would like to know. Although there aren't any sections to your article, the article is detailed and constitutes all the information, I as a reader, would like to know about a down jacket. The article is about an object and although there is not much to say, I'd say you can expand more with pictures and information about the trends of a down jacket over time. The article is neutral and informative, great job Kaig2000!

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