User:Kaileesmyth/Environmental racism/Jg1101 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Kaileemyth
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Kaileesmyth/Environmental racism

Lead

 * The lead is for the most part good but the I think the clarification of environmental racism in the context provided can be confusing as the definition seems to to be tailored for the US. Perhaps provide more on the international concept of it.

Content

 * The content is very informative, however, I think there needs to be more citations throughout.  In particular the definitions included in the "definition" section need to be cited so readers can verify them.

Tone and Balance

 * Given the sensitivity of the topic at hand, the tone is very appropriate.

Sources and References

 * I think the sources and references are what needs the most improvement in the article. A good amount of times throughout the article, "[citation needed]" appears.  The bibliography looks fine and the links work well!

Organization

 * The general organization looks fine. I think the distinction between the US and International impacts of environmental racism are presented well.  In regards to some of the bold topics, there are a couple such as "West Virginia" that have no content with them.

Images and Media

 * I like the idea of the images in the article, but I think some of them are random and don't apply to the particular topic at hand. The images definitely increase the readability!

Overall impressions

 * The comments I provided are in regards to the original article. I think the article has some great qualities and with a few tweaks and edits with the references it can be really good!