User:Kaileydm/Greek chorus/Adler512 Peer Review

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Kaileydm
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 * Greek chorus

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes made to the Greek Chorus article seem pertinent, informative, well-sourced, neutral, and well-organized. The discussion of the chorus in Thyestes as a way to illustrate the chorus' role as an intermediary between the stage and the audience is both a good way to illustrate the point you're making and to tie in the changes with this course's content. I think focusing on the moral role of the chorus was especially important. The content itself was also neutral, factually describing the events of the play and the chorus' role in it. It was also well-organized, wisely being positioned after discussion of other Greek tragedies and flowing well from describing the chorus to the events of the play. The source is very well-utilized. The other added contribution about the modern day use of the chorus in "A Strange Loop" has all of the qualities that I mentioned previously. I think it's important to emphasize the timeless quality of this trope, and the fact that it can be utilized today shows that. It wasn't too much information, but just enough to demonstrate the point. It also made appropriate use of the source. If I have any criticism, it would be to expand your points with more sources. Overall, these were great, meaningful contributions.