User:KailynnP2021/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Dancing Fairies

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I choose this article to evaluate because, I have an interest in art. Specifically art that depicts fantasy creatures or animals.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of the article was very concise and worked as a well constructed summary for the article page. I found that much of the content provided was relevant. However, there were some sections of it that had broken off and spoke a little bit more in-detail about subjects that don't even appear in the painting. The tone for the article was very neutral and was mostly presenting the facts in a formal fashion. The sources and references used for the article were relevant and all the links provided were still in working condition. I felt that the article was well organized. The sections of the article were used appropriately and were easy to follow. Only one image was used, but it was captioned correctly. The article was a part of two different Wikipedia projects. The article is a part of WikiProject Visual Art and WikiProject Sweden. The only way I would improve this article is to touch up the "Painting" section of the article and remove the tidbits about elves. I don't think they connect well in the article and if they are supposed to be included, I think they should have better segues to the topic. It felt as though it came out of nowhere.