User:Kait.Snow/Microfauna/AvaArdito Peer Review

General info
Kait.Snow
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kait.Snow/Microfauna
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Microfauna

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

The lead has been significantly updated to better encapsulate the contents of the article. Lead has a concise and descriptive first sentence and the lead consists of contents present throughout the major sections of the article. There could be a sentence added at the end to bring all the major sections together a bit more.

Content:

The contents of the article are relevant, well organized, and concisely describe topics within each section.

Tone & Balance:

The article is neutral with no strong bias.

Sources & References:

Content is well sourced throughout the article. Sources are up to date and relevant to the topic.

Organization:

Article is well organized and content is formatted in a way that makes sense and is easy for the reader to follow. Content is concise and there are no grammatical errors that I can see.

Images & Media:

Media has been added to the article to enhance content present. Images are well captioned and relevant. One suggestion may be to add an image of habitats or microfauna within their habitats. This may be helpful for readers to visualize microfauna within plant litter, surface soil, and water films. Another suggestion is to make the 2nd image (size comparison) larger so that readers are able to read and understand the size comparison diagram better.

Overall:

Content added to the article strongly enhances the topic and offers concise information that gives readers a better understanding of the topic. I especially appreciated the content added to the "Habitat" section and felt as though it further enhanced the information added within the "Role" section.