User:Kaitievivian/Social work with groups/Hazelmw Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kaitievivian


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Kaitievivian/Social work with groups


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social work with groups

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looks like you are still at the beginning stages of planning what you want to contribute to the article you are interested in unless you didn't use your sandbox and contributed right to the article itself. I first want to comment on the topic you chose. From what I believe of the Wikipedia assignment description, we are to choose an article that relates to creative work. But I have noticed a few different people are doing articles that they are interested in, maybe for the profession, they are going into. So maybe that was an option and I just didn't see it or you got the topic approved. Just thought I would mention it just in case. I also saw on the article page it is rated a B-class article and we are supposed to be editing and contributing to an S-class article.

The official article itself needs reference links throughout the article after the references are cited in-text. It is something Wikipedia likes its articles to have throughout so readers have accessible links to get to other related articles or the sources cited in the article. So maybe adding these links could be a good contribution to the article. Just a suggestion.

Also, if you make changes throughout the article don't forget to accommodate the lead section to reflect any information that should be included at the beginning of the article. Your bibliography looks great and well-researched. I wish you well throughout the rest of the Wikipedia assignment.