User:Kaitlin3farrell/Calupoh/Sophi.cheng Peer Review


 * Everything in the article is relevant to the article topic and there was nothing that distracted me.
 * The article is neutral and doesn't have any sentences that lean toward a side.
 * I would add citations to each fact that was stated
 * Also, check on the grammer, there is a few spots that I saw that needs to be fixed.
 * Everything is well organized.
 * Overall, good job!

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)