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Article Evaluation - Manel Esteller


 * University of Barcelona 1992 in Medicine
 * Specialized in molecular genetics in 1996
 * Studied molecular genetics of inherited breast cancer
 * Article could use subheadings to help guide the reader
 * "we already know" needs a citation
 * one of the citations cannot be found
 * Casual tone
 * Article has the start-class with low importance rating - needs to be developed

I hope to improve the organization of this Wikipedia article by adding subheadings to better guide the reader to what they are wanting to learn about the subject. I intend to add more citations that are easily accessible to other readers to ensure that the information is reliable and reproducible. I would like to provide a more thorough explanation of the subject's previous research as well as what he is currently working on. Book - Manel Esteller edited the book "DNA Methlyation: Approaches, Methods and Applications" - in the book, he attempts to explain to readers how DNA methylation plays a role in disease, particularly the role in cancer. He also summarizes a lot of research from clinical trials and other research that has been done on DNA methylation in the human body to provide readers with many different point of views concerning the topic.

Another book - "Epigenetics in biology and medicine" - Esteller explained the main principles of epigenetics, new discoveries in the field, and how they can be applied functionally. He has examined the relationship between epigenetics and "disease, genetic syndromes, immunity, cardiovascular disease, and epigenomics".

Sources:


 * “Monographs editor: manel esteller” Esteller M Genes & cancer vol. 2,6 (2011): 603.
 * Pennings, Sari. “DNA Methylation: Approaches, Methods and Applications.” Briefings in Functional Genomics & Proteomics, vol. 4, no. 1, May 2005, pp. 82–83. EBSCOhost, doi:10.1093/bfgp/4.1.82.
 * footnote 1 in above paragraph

Peer review:

The article is small and definitely could use improvement. Your notes look like you are going in the right direction with wanting to add subtitles and separating out information. The only other thing I would add would be to move the third paragraph to a biography section on the top of the page.

Peer review: You have great notes and seem to know exactly what you want to do with this and how to get there. A couple of these facts have already been stated in the article. However, I think the subheadings will help organize the page better.