User:Kaiyi.xia/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Video game console

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I am a big fan of video game consoles. I thought it was going to be filled with information about the development of various consoles but this article lacks a lot of information.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead section could be better made. It contains information that is not found elsewhere in the article. The lead section also does contain brief descriptions of the articles major points. The tone and balance is adequate. There seems to be many different sources which is a really good sign. The article also includes various pictures as well which is good. This article is labeled as top importance with a C-grade from WikiProjects. The talk page has many suggestions on there. Overall, this article is not of the best quality however it has great potential. There are many people who care to improve this article and the article just lacks some content. I feel as if this article can be improved very easily.

Good job way to explain why this is not a good article. I learn something new- Jolesha Allen