User:Kalabasasss332/The Wizard of Oz (2011 musical)/Bluemarker06 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kalabasasss332


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kalabasasss332/The Wizard of Oz (2011 musical)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Wizard of Oz (2011 musical)
 * The Wizard of Oz (2011 musical)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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This seems to be a very nice start. There is nice information about the characters but there they could use more. The information that they do have is good, but it can use some further explaining. I am interested to see where this article ends up!