User:Kalabasasss332/The Wizard of Oz (2011 musical)/Redlamp99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kalabasasss332


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Kalabasasss332/The Wizard of Oz (2011 musical) - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Wizard of Oz (2011 musical) - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very concise and clear. The addition is formatted like the rest of the article so it will fit in. I am slightly confused about the information added. I am not very familiar with the Wizard of Oz, but it seems that what is in the sandbox is all relevant to the film from 1939 and not the 2011 musical. The sandbox article addresses the actors of the film which are not relevant to the 2011 musical that was assigned. However, the information given was very good information and was neutral. All the information given is cited with a credible source. The organization of the addition to the article is great. Nothing is confusing or muddy. There are no images added. Maybe add some images of the actors mentioned. Overall, the added content was well written and organized but isn't relevant or important to the assigned article.