User:Kalanalex/Auldbrass Plantation/Mpalomo1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kalanalex


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Auldbrass Plantation


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Auldbrass Plantation

Evaluate the drafted changes
I enjoyed reading your contributions to the Auldbrass Plantation article. The article flows smoothly and has a lot of relevant information in it. Although the article is short, the first paragraph does a great job introducing the rest of the text. It gives the location of the building as well as some background knowledge on it, which is very helpful. However, I think that it would be helpful to put the second paragraph under its own heading, as that paragraph mainly talks about the history of the plantation. The content under the design heading is very well crafted and put together. It was easy to understand the design of the plantation without having to look at any photographs.