User:Kaleighbrennan/Early childhood trauma/GraceRinaldi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kaleighbrennan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaleighbrennan/Early_childhood_trauma?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Early childhood trauma
 * Early childhood trauma

Evaluate the drafted changes
Kaleigh's Edit:

Psychological resilience often refers to an individual's ability to utilize past experience with stressors to successfully navigate new life challenges. Children who endure certain trauma in early life may develop the capacity to anticipate potential conflict or trauma before it occurs, and can plan to react accordingly, with minimal stress. Some people are more apt to cope with stressful events than others. Not every child who has experienced early trauma will display psychological resilience, as everyone's brains are wired differently; where some children may find future scenarios easier to navigate as a result, others may fall back on maladaptive coping mechanisms that make future stressors more difficult. If the early childhood trauma stems from a parent or guardian, the child may develop resilience through repeated exposure to mistreatment, giving them a better picture of which strategies work, and which ones do not. This complicates the lingering effects of the trauma; research shows that these children need a secure adult, whether this be a parent or guardian, who makes them feel safe and comfortable, to assist them in overcoming their negative experiences.

Peer Review: First sentence I change the grammar to, "..utilize past experiences that were stressful to successfully...".

-Check grammar

'''- What source did you use? Your topic seems to follow whatever source you used but personally I'd mention it at least once.'''

- Overall I thought you summarized well what the original article had, maybe find another source or if you have what was it?